Here it is, the new short story that I will use on my unsuspecting high school victims. We will see if this one inspires stories about non-serial killer related topics. I will give some thoughts at the end, but, for now, here we go.

Vermintide
France, 1807
Shafts of pale morning light tumbled through the forest canopy and careened into the carriage as it clattered along the dirt road. Every rock in France seemed to jump in the way of the wheels, throwing the wagon about like a schooner on rough seas. But Napoleon didn’t mind. Plush seats in a bumping coach were still preferable to days riding horseback. He shoved a grape in his mouth, ripping into the tender flesh with his front teeth, as Chief of Staff Demoux continued to blather on. 
“...are harassing the western borders. We are sending a fresh contingent of troops and supplies there tomorrow.” Demoux flipped through his ledgers, gripping them tightly as the carriage lurched again. “Emperor, the riots are getting worse in the Capitol. The people complain that we aren’t doing enough to quell the rabble rousers.”
“Cela n'a pas d'importance.” Napoleon waved his hand as if brushing the report away. “Someone always worries. Let them. We are taking action; that is enough.” 
He tossed another grape into his mouth and squished it with his front teeth so Demoux could see. The man winced and quickly shut his ledger.
“Of course, Sire.”
Napoleon glanced out the window. “Are we almost there? My feet grow restless.”
Lieutenant Lutre spoke up. “Nearly there, Commander. Your legs will soon see some sport.”
“Good. I haven’t killed anything in days.” 
Both men winced as he bit into another grape, lips open. The juices ran down his chin. Luckily, for Lutre and Demoux, the carriage rolled to a stop only a few grapes later. 
“Finally,” Napoleon said, standing up. 
Without waiting for his men, he opened the door and stepped out before the coach stopped bouncing. The forest had given way to a meadow of low scrubgrass  and patches of dirt. Horses snorted and shuffled as his mounted guards saluted from behind the coach. He ignored them as he stomped, testing the compactness of the dirt. A deep breath brought clean air to his lungs, free from the soot of the city. A man appeared at his side. 
Chief Officer Berthier saluted, fingers touching his brow, hand flat, palm facing out. “Emperor, welcome. I trust the ride wasn’t too long?” 
“Could you not have found something closer, Alexandre?”
“Sorry, Your Excellency, this was the most defensible spot I could find.”
Napoleon grimaced. The ground looked more lumpy than King George’s backside and nearly as white. He could twist an ankle running someone down in this meadow, and the blood would turn the dirt straight to muck. These were his good boots! It was turning into a terrible day. 
Seeing his displeasure, Berthier hurried to make amends. “If the emperor doesn’t like this particular spot, I would be happy to reset for another day--”
“No! No.” Napoleon had not endured Demoux’s blathering and a jarring carriage ride for nothing. “Are they ready?”
“Oui. I spaced them in two cages, one on either side of the meadow, just out of sight. Once let loose, they’ll run right into your line of sight. They’ll never know what hit them.”
Maybe the day wouldn’t be a total loss. “How many are there?”
Berthier smiled. “Now, this should please your excellency. I had to clear out every farm and hovel in the area, but I found enough of the little devils to fill two cages.”
Now Napoleon smiled, too. Two cages full! Why, he would run out of musket balls and be forced to start using his sabre. What sport!
“Excellent job, Berthier. Are we ready to release?”
“At your command.”
Demoux and Lutre had exited the carriage and were lugging a stock of six rifles to a makeshift rack behind him. They lined the rifles on the rack and set out a bucket of musket balls, plugs, and black powder horns. They would reload the guns as fast as Napoleon could fire them. Indeed, he had been wrong. This was turning into quite the celebration. 
“We, too, are ready, Emperor,” Lutre said.
“Bien joué! Berthier, make ready to release.”
Chief Officer Berthier nodded and waved to a soldier waiting at the edge of the trees. Both of them disappeared into the forest. Lutre handed Napoleon a loaded musket. He turned toward the meadow and held the rifle tucked up by his shoulder. The moment his prey burst out of the undergrowth, he would bring the rifle up and fire.
He waited, finger against the cold steel of the trigger, the wood grip digging into his palm. The anticipation wasn’t as intense as before a true battle, but Napoleon always felt a bit giddy with a rifle in his hands. A rifle was death incarnate, fire and power and fear forged into metal and wood. A twitch of the finger, and a life ended. A shift of the trigger, and all hell broke loose. He lived for that moment, that heartbeat of searing glory. Quelle joie!
A sudden gust of wind ripped through the pines, setting the branches into motion. Napoleon had his gun up searching wildly for targets before he realized his mistake. 
He lowered the rifle and growled. “What is taking them so long?”
Demoux cleared his throat. “I’m sure--”
The crack of a pistol ricocheted through the trees, cutting the chief of staff off.
“Finally,” Napoleon said, raising his rifle again.
He waited, pulse racing, but the moment stretched, silence returning to the meadow. No one moved. The foliage lay as still as a painting, not even a breeze to rustle the leaves anymore. Surely his men had opened the cages by now; any moment the grass would part and he would have blood. Yet, still he waited. The musket grew heavy in his hands, but he did not lower it again. His muscles ached, but still he held position. In war, the man who broke was the first to die. He licked his lips and tasted the sticky sweet juice of the grapes on his skin.
A sound rose out of the frozen forest like a thundercloud boiling over a mountain. Bushes rustled so loud Napoleon thought the wind must have returned, but the trees did not sway. The shrubbery at the edge of the clearing began to shake, and, behind the rattling of the branches, a pattering grew like a great downpour from the heavens was rushing at them. Napoleon let the end of his rifle drop slightly in shock. 
The bushes seemed to dissolve as a tidal wave of white and gray boiled into the clearing. Their bodies flowed over the grass, converging from both sides of the clearing like the clash of two great rivers. Rabbits! He had never seen so many rabbits. They filled the meadow in a seething mass that turned its head and flowed straight for him. 
“Sacré bleu!”
His finger reflexively pulled the trigger. A click and a flash ignited the black powder in an explosion that filled the air with acrid smoke. He barely registered the deafening boom, but he did see the musket ball impact the ground far behind the charging rabbits. The vermin didn’t even slow at the shot. They just barreled toward him like a tidal wave. A vermin tide!
Their fury demon bodies were almost on him, so he grabbed the barrel of the gun and swung at the little devils. The swing went wide in his frenzy, putting him off balance. They were on him now, jumping at his legs, clawing their way up his chest. He stumbled and fell onto his back in a puff of white dust. Rabbits washed over him, ignoring his thrashing arms. Each time he plucked one from his face, another filled its place. They knew his fear. Little tongues licked relentlessly at the dried grape on his chin. He felt teeth sink into his flesh.
Napoleon screamed.
End


I learn a lot from my students. They help me think outside of the box. A few years ago, a student found out about Napoleon and the rabbit attach while deciding on a topic for his historical fiction. Then, like a spider weaving a web, fate reached out and provided me the same story on a folklore podcast. I haven’t been able to forget about this strange bit of history since.
When I first thought about changing the example story for the unit away from serial killers, I could not get my mind to let go of this curious tale. I knew it had the potential to be funny, concise, and maybe a little strange. From the get go, I knew I had to put a horror twist on the attack of the bunnies. It was fun to write, and, I hope, fun to read. I will let you all know the results of my little experiment after I teach 11A again. Next year. Sorry.

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A foggy London alley. Blood soaked fingers. Is he the killer? Or a vigilante?

My students like me because I’m pretty.
Okay, not true. I have been teaching for seven and a half years, and I almost quit after year one, but that is a story for another time. God is in it, for sure.
But, this story is about why my students like me, kind of. When I first began my teaching career, most students didn’t like me. My sarcasm hit wrong, and I was still trying to teach the way I had been taught. A few students did get me, and I always seem to have a small crazy fan club for some strange reason, but it took a while for my English classes to be liked by the majority instead of the minority.
I owe a lot of the change in popularity to my writing. Don’t get me wrong, very few of the students ever read my books. It is not really about my writing; I have just learned to teach differently because I am a writer, and the students responded. Also, my sarcasm finally wormed its way into their stone cold hearts. Go figure.
I teach to help them understand the power of words. My entire class is devoted to showing them that, if they work at it, they can be a good writer, and that makes them a good thinker. They don’t have to be right the first time. Writing is about trial and error; you just have to get something on the page and then figure out how to alter and manipulate the words until it works. Learning is often the same, especially at the high school level. I show them that words have power, and they appreciate that.
There is one unit that I always teach: writing a historical fiction. To be able to write a historical fiction short story, not only do they have to learn writing technique, they first have to figure out what they think is interesting from history and then research it. They get to interact with history in an authentic way, with curiosity. Then, they get the chance to change the world or just one person’s life. Students complain because that is their way, but I can tell they enjoy the assignment. It is nothing like anything they have ever done before. Also, I get to have a little fun.
I prime the lesson by having them read a short story called “A Whitechapel Night.” It takes them on a journey through Jack the Ripper’s London and forces them to ask if the main character’s actions make him a monster or a hero.
We read the story, define vocabulary, and argue about whether the main character is Jack the Ripper or if he is hunting Jack. They bring up evidence for both sides without being able to completely decide. I love this conversation because that is exactly how I designed it. I wrote the story specifically to be their example for the assignment. I give it to them without my name on it, so they read it cold. About the point they start getting frustrated about who the main character really is, I tell them that if they will go through the story and figure out through research what parts I changed from history and what I kept accurate, maybe we can figure out who the main character is meant to be.
Most of them don’t notice what I said. But someone always does. “Wait, you wrote this?” I don’t teach much of my own writing, but I have my books at the front of my room all year. Still, they are surprised I wrote something that was actually good. Thanks guys.
It is a good story, albeit a bit dark, and the students like it, but I have noticed a trend in the stories they write for the unit. Multiple students write about serial killers. I have been asking myself, “Is my story acting like a primer?” Probably. So, in comes my experiment.
After five years of using “A Whitechapel Night” to teach the unit, I am changing things up. I wrote a brand new short story for the unit. No serial killers involved. Still a bit dark, though. I will get to that story in another post, but I wrote it to see if a new type of example story would prime my students away from serial killers. I am curious to see what happens.
So, here is what we, you and I, are going to do. I have two stories that I like. I am going to share the serial killer one in this post (it is dark with some blood but safe) and the other story in my next post. Then maybe one day I can get back to you the results.
Now, I am just going to share my writing, because that is what I like to do. The story I am about to share has always been well received by my students, so I hope you enjoy it as well.
A Whitechapel Night
Mist curled around Thomas Bond’s grime spattered boots, but it shied away from his hands, smeared with sticky red as they were. The London vapors also avoided the two misshapen piles on the street in front of him. It was like the restless souls of the city had coalesced in the air to watch and rebuke him. He would call it an ill omen, but those thoughts were reserved for folk who still cared, who still saw the gap between sin and salvation. Thomas couldn’t see that gap… not anymore. His hands trembled as he watched the blood drip from the tips of his fingers.
… will find my observations, concerning the connections between the three cases you assigned me, on the other papers contained herein. All three of the victims in question sustained eerily similar mutilations. My conclusions are disturbing at best. I do not wish to imagine the agony these women undoubtedly suffered as they expired. 
The parallels to the other two cases I brought to your attention earlier are more tenuous. Although I see alarming correlations, I cannot give a definitive answer at this time. I give further explanation in my reports. 
Thomas paused in his letter to the inspector. How much more information could he give without becoming too involved? He wanted his name left out of this, at least for now. He glanced over his notes and observations once more and nodded in satisfaction. After scribbling an injunction for the inspector to keep him in the loop, he signed the letter and rolled it together with the reports. He stood, grabbed his coat and bag, and checked his pocket watch. The ticking hands read 8:15; time was running short. With hurried strides, he left his office for the front desk. 
Once in the atrium, he left his papers on the desk with a note for the clerk to have a runner dispatched with the papers in the morning. He exited the building quickly then and hailed a passing cab as it trundled along the cobbles outside. The carriage slowed to a stop nearby as the driver tightened the reins and set the brake. 
“I’m almost off me shift. Ho’ far ya going?” the coachman asked angrily.
“Corner of Mansell and Leadenhal.”
The coachman spit onto the street and gave Thomas an open glare. “I can’t take ya tha’ far. Tha’s all the way over by Whitechapel, tha’ is. Me shift is nearly done. ‘Sides, nothing goods been happenin’ over there of late. Some say there’s a Ripper taken ‘em righ’ off the street.”
Thomas ignored the warning. He produced a wad of rolled bills and held it up.
The man’s eyes widened ever so slightly at the money. He glanced around then snatched the payment and shoved it deep into his coat pocket. “All righ’ then, in ya go.”
He climbed into the coach, which leapt immediately into motion as the door shut. Thomas watched the gas lamps flicker in the growing mist as the coach swayed and bounced along the uneven London streets. Midnight. He must be in position before midnight, or the entire day would be wasted.
The coach stopped at the corner of Mansell and Leadenhall long enough for Thomas to clamber out and shut the door behind him. The coachman tipped his hat and snapped the reins to get the horses moving again. They clopped loudly down the street as Thomas began walking into Whitechapel. He checked his watch again: 10:15. Good. He had time to disappear.
Whitechapel lay in a grim twilight. The flickering light from the gas lamps barely managed to cut through the thick smog. On other streets, more important streets, arc lights seemed to all but ignore the vapor as their industrial bulbs nearly burned the mist out of the air. But Jack the Ripper did not hunt near the arc lights, and Jack was why Thomas was in Whitechapel.
Near the center of the district, he spotted an alley between two tall buildings. It was long and dark. Perfect. He glanced around, and, spotting no curious eyes, he merged into the dank darkness, moving quietly. Just inside the mouth of the alley, but far enough to be out of reach of the weak light from the gas lamps, Thomas found a deep recess in the architecture of one of the buildings. He ducked into it and leaned back out to check his view of the rest of the alley. Satisfied, he settled in for a long wait in the dark. 
As the cold finally numbed Thomas’s toes and threatened to begin eating through his coat, a muffled giggle echoed off the smooth walls. He started and moved to watch the opening to the street. Indistinct voices reached his ears through the darkness. His heart pulsed in his neck as he waited, muscles tense. Three brutal murders in Whitechapel, five if you listened to the papers, over the last three months. But that didn’t stop the usuals from walking the streets at night. It probably should. 
Two figures, arm in arm, passed the mouth of the alley. Thomas reached for the knife in his bag, but the figures did not turn into the darkness of the unlit side passage. He relaxed and leaned back against the wall, calming his heart with slow steady breaths. The air around him felt charged with energy. Something was going to change tonight; he could feel it.
A shadow passed silently by him in the alley. He nearly yelled out but caught himself. Soft footfalls and the swish of loose cloth came to him now. He smelled a strawberry perfume mingling with the musty smell of mold and mildew from the alley. She was still too close, so he waited for her to move farther into the darkness. More footfalls, heavier this time, warned him of another approaching body. He willed the night to enclose him, not that it listened, as the newcomer slunk past. Thomas saw the man’s broad shoulders and top hat even in the gloom. The stranger held a long, slim object in front of him. 
Thomas slipped his hand into his bag and gripped the knife as he waited for the two figures to move just far enough into the alley. He wondered idly how much blood the alleys of London had seen through the ages. Probably more than enough; how much more would it take before the city broke? The alley refused to answer his thoughts, so he held the knife tightly in his hand and crept out to follow a fresh trail. 
Too late. Thomas lowered his quaking hands and looked at the bodies. He was a surgeon, this shouldn’t bother him. But it did. He had tried to prevent this. Hadn’t he? Tried to fix Whitechapel. In the end, his efforts didn’t matter. He was too late. Too late for the girl with the strawberry perfume, too late for the man in the Top Hat, and too late to help Thomas Bond. He turned away from the bodies and quickly vanished in the mists as he hurried home. He realized now that it had always been too late to help anyone.
End.
See the mystery? After my students take the night to research and analyze the structure of the thing, we come back to class and discuss what they found. They really get into the research, and it is always fun to see what they found out about this event in history. At the end of our discussion, we come back around to who is Thomas Bond? The killer or a vigilante?
Short pause for dramatic effect.
“I don’t know,” I say. They stare at me. I explain that I wrote it with the intent to be ambiguous and that I told myself not to decide if he was Jack the Ripper or not. General chaos ensues for a moment, I regain control of the class, and we move on.
Okay, you got me. There is no chaos after my announcement. A few students give me angry looks, but that is about all. I take what I can get.
So, next time I will post my new story: “Vermintide.”
Hope you you enjoyed a foray into foggy, bloody London.
Happy reading!

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